Wikipedia:Peer review/Fargo (season 2)/archive1

Fargo (season 2)
This article passed its GA nomination almost 10 months ago and not much has changed since. It's very clean and sharp, but I feel falls just short of optimal health. Eventually I would like to take this article for an FA review (only befitting considering how great season 2 was!) and some feedback would be much appreciated.

Thanks in advanced, DAP  💅 20:37, 8 May 2017 (UTC)

Other than it seems well written. If you have the time could you review my own peer review? It's Peer review/Yu Kanda/archive2. Regards.Tintor2 (talk) 23:03, 10 May 2017 (UTC)
 * I'll give it a try:
 * Is the Prod Cod. necessary for casual readers?
 * Avoid short paragraphs like the first one from Development and Writing. Either expand it or merge it with the second paragraph (same with ratings)
 * Try to give more flow to the reviews like "X reviewer also" or "On the other hand, X reviewer"
 * Are there sales articles that could expand the home media releases?