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Faryl Smith
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I'm hoping to get this article to featured status, but my previous nominations on a similar topic did not pass first time. I feel that the article is comprehensive and my sourcing is good, but I worry the writing may not be great in places. I welcome any and all comments. Thanks in advance. J Milburn (talk) 11:32, 19 September 2011 (UTC)