Wikipedia:Peer review/Fenix*TX/archive1

Fenix*TX
I have been doing a lot of work on the article about the band Fenix*TX and I was wondering what improvements are to be made for it to become a featured article. --HarryCane 13:48, 2 March 2006 (UTC)

It looks pretty good. I just had a couple of minor issues: Finally, since the band members don't have their own pages, could you include some background on the key members? Perhaps in a members section after the history. Thanks. &mdash; RJH 00:41, 12 March 2006 (UTC)
 * Could you include some clarification of the expression "gleeful lyrics"?
 * Please clarify the minor ambiguity in the following sentence: "the album featured ten more raucous and energetic songs than on their previous efforts". Were there a total of ten songs, all of which were more raucous? Or were just ten out of all the songs more raucous?
 * I cleared up both things and added a new music style section with samples. --HarryCane 15:19, 14 March 2006 (UTC)