Wikipedia:Peer review/Fighting Fantasy Game Books/archive1

Fighting Fantasy
I've expanded this article extensively - previously it was little more than a stub. I've made it about as good as I can without outside input, yet I would like to be able to make it better. Hence, I would like it to be peer reviewed. I'm looking for advice on style, formatting, content, everything. Let me have it! Euchrid 09:44, 7 August 2005 (UTC)


 * various random comments


 * please expand the intro to a full paragraph
 * try approaching the publishers for explicit permission to use their cover art; alternatively consider if high resolution fair use images is appropriate. (email sent, awaiting response)
 * please consider adding inline references, for example in the style of Footnote3. It's good to be able to find out where information came from and how to get more. (all information not available in the books themselves is taken from the two websites mentioned in the 'references' section.)
 * some of the language like this should make it clear just how important this series is. should probably be droped as not house style (let the facts talk for themselves) (done).
 * you might want to get rid of some of the red links, probably not all of the books should have individual articles. (done)
 * looks good.. nice to see bits of old history Mozzerati 21:33, August 8, 2005 (UTC)


 * Looks great, would be handy to have a scan of a partly completed score card out of a book, skill stamina luck items etc. Overall excellent tho. --PopUpPirate 17:16, August 11, 2005 (UTC) (There's a difficulty with copyright when it comes to interior art - covers are fair use, interior art isn't.  There'd be a few examples of interior art already if that were at all possible)