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Finland Plot
This article was recently created to fill a hole in in Wikipedia's coverage of key events leading up to the recent September 2006 Thailand coup. This particular topic, the so-called Finland Plot, should be fairly static, since the principals, namely Thaksin Shinawatra, Sondhi Limthongkul, and the People's Alliance for Democracy have been either deposed, dissolved, or stopped any further allegations. The military junta has not formalized the Finland Plot accusations, which probably means that they wont be investigated in any depth. I'd like your inputs on:


 * NPOV. It is a controversial topic, and I want to make sure that I'm being fair to all parties.
 * Wording. My wording has been noted to be a bit off sometimes, so please feel free to copy-edit.
 * Anything else that needs improvement would be greatly appreciated.

-- Patiwat 02:39, 22 September 2006 (UTC)

Review

The article seems neutral as far as I can tell, and wording is fine. I made a couple of very minor edits to words - hope you don't mind. Visually, an image in the synopsis (perhaps of Thaksin Shinawatra?) might balance the top of the page, but that would only be an aesthetic thing.