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Flag of Azerbaijan
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I want to further improve it for later nomination for FAC. I would rather deal with any doubts, questions, errors, or omissions here than at FAC, so additional feedback and recommendations are welcome.

Thanks, Neftchi (talk) 08:57, 30 May 2011 (UTC)

Comments by Parutakupiu: — Parutakupiu (talk) 00:58, 5 June 2011 (UTC)
 * The infobox display the flag's use as a civil and state flag and ensign, but the lead text then says it's also used as war flag, naval ensign and jack.
 * The lead intro should not be over-descriptive about the flag (e.g. color shades), since that can be elaborated on the rest of the article; on the other hand, very little is mentioned about the flag's history and evolution, which is better developed on other sections.
 * The prose on the symbolism section has to be improved.
 * Why the hyphen in "the red color-its intention..." and "the green strip-its relation..."?
 * What is ADR? Please specify.
 * "The national flag of the Azerbaijan consists..." The "the" appears to be lost in here.
 * Seems to me that the design section should come before the symbolism, so you can describe first the flag and then the meaning of each element.
 * It would be better to follow the flag's evolution stages if you showed them within the sections that are describing them, instead of all being clumped up in one section.
 * The section on the independence needs a desperate prose overhaul.
 * Employ bullet list to enumerate the places where the flag should be raised, as it gets very messy to read them in one block of text.


 * Thanks for your feedback, this is very helpful.
 * Infobox is adjusted accordingly
 * Changed lead
 * Fixed the hypened text on red and green colors.
 * specified ADR in every section.
 * Corrected the "the" in the constitution.
 * Placed design above symbolism.
 * I will work on the remaining points. Neftchi (talk) 21:28, 5 June 2011 (UTC)


 * Zscout370 made the remaining adjustments. He fixed the broken English in the sections and removed the gallery. Neftchi (talk) 16:42, 6 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the assistance on the lead Parutakupiu, I very much appreciate it. Neftchi (talk) 21:28, 7 June 2011 (UTC)