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Flying the Flag (for You)
I've cleaned up this article, given citations, and what I'm wondering is what has to be done to take it up to GA quality. Will (is it can be time for messages now plz?) 12:29, 13 May 2007 (UTC)


 * Hm, as I pointed out on the talk, a discussion of the song's critical merits (or lack of them) is a must - if the article doesn't say anything about the melody or lyrics, or their significance, it's not exactly comprehensive. At the moment I don't even know what the song is about, though having read the lyrics, I kind of see why. :p I also understand that visual effects in the performance are important in Eurovision, so mentioning that would probably be a good idea. Johnleemk | Talk 09:57, 14 May 2007 (UTC)
 * I've written a section on the lyrics and their similarity to real flights. Anything else? I'm not a music theorist, so I can't write on the melody, unfortunately. Will (is it can be time for messages now plz?) 20:04, 14 May 2007 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 23:58, 17 May 2007 (UTC)