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Foreign relations of India

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 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for June 2008.

This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because… I have restructured the whole article, added new sections and it took three hours for it.This is one of important pages concerning India.

Thanks, Vijay Sai (talk) 03:20, 26 June 2008 (UTC)

Ruhrfisch comments: Very briefly, here are some suggestions for improvement. If you want more comments, please ask here. Hope this helps. If my comments are useful, please consider peer reviewing an article, especially one at Peer review/backlog (which is how I found this article). Yours, Ruhrfisch &gt;&lt;&gt; &deg; &deg; 21:31, 30 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Lead does not follow WP:LEAD - there is not even a mention of foreign relations in the first two sentences. My rule of thumb is to include every header in the lead in some way, but the article may need fewer sections / header too
 * Article is severly lacking in references - whole sections are completely unreferenced. Per WP:CITE references come AFTER punctuation, and are usually at the end of a sentence or phrase. My rule of thumb is that every quote, every statistic, every extraordinary claim and every paragraph needs a ref.
 * Internet refs need URL, title, author if known, publisher and date accessed. cite web and other cite templates may be helpful. See WP:CITE and WP:V
 * Section headers do not follow WP:HEAD - they should not have links for example.
 * Article needs a serious copyedit for flow and typos.