Wikipedia:Peer review/Foreigner Belt/archive1

Foreigner Belt
I would like constructive criticism on the Foreigner Belt article. I hope to one day make it a featured article or at least a good article. Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated. Blackoutbill 21:28, 7 May 2006 (UTC)
 * Someday someone in a sourer mood than myself is going to come along and nominate this article for deletion, saying it is a non-notable item from a single episode of an American TV show. They may well be right. I shall confine my comments to helping you avoid that. First, you would probably stand a better chance if you moved the article to Revenge Of The Mooninites, that is, the episode name, and covered the entire episode. Wikipedia has plenty of precedent, for better or worse, for articles on individual TV episodes, though there are also many editors who take issue with that. Second, and more fundamentally, you absolutely need to find some secondary sources with mentions of the Foreigner Belt. For it to be notable, the fictional object should have a demonstrable impact on the real world, some pop-culture-mention, anything. If the only source the article has is the episode itself, well, Wikipedia articles ideally aren't just plot summaries. &mdash;Bunchofgrapes (talk) 02:48, 8 May 2006 (UTC)


 * Sorry, I deleted this article per Articles for deletion/Foreigner Belt. --Deathphoenix ʕ 06:42, 19 May 2006 (UTC)