Wikipedia:Peer review/Fort Saginaw Mall/archive1

Fort Saginaw Mall
Okay, right away I know I could probably use better references for the opening date, and for the opening/closure of various anchors, but I've exhausted every relevant online reference to this mall (and there ain't many). I guess I'll have to hit the Saginaw library. Other than that, however, I'd like to hear some feedback on the entire article. How're the coherence, word choice, structure, etc. etc.? Are the photos sufficient? Does anything need rewording? TenPoundHammer 13:00, 12 April 2007 (UTC)
 * The structure of the article looks good. I am not familiar with this mall, and the article is very informative in my opinion, therefore it must be of reasonably good quality. I do agree that some citations are still needed, but I would suggest that you find some sources, and the library trip sounds like a good idea. A wikipedian in Saginaw may be able to help you out! One more comment is that if you can find a source other than your own website to back up some of your claims, I would reccomend it, hovever that is minor. To me it seems to be a slight conflict of interest that you, the main contributor to the article, are using yourself as a source. Great work!!! --Nenyedi Talk Deeds@ 20:38, 12 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Thanks. I don't live all that close to Saginaw so it may take a while. TenPoundHammer 23:23, 12 April 2007 (UTC)