Wikipedia:Peer review/Francisco Cardinal Jiménez de Cisneros/archive1

Francisco Cardinal Jiménez de Cisneros
Self-nom - would appreciate feedback before nominating for FAC. Thank You! --Stbalbach 18:38, 13 December 2005 (UTC)


 * 1) Try reducing the size of the lead image (only by a little bit) as it takes up too much text space.
 * 2) It is not indicated which person is Cisneros in the lead image. (Forgive me if it is obvious, but I am like that sometimes)
 * 3) The article needs a thorough copy-edit; one sentence strikes me the most; He was giveing to all, and founded and maintained very many benevolent institutions in his diocese. I'll give it a shot, but I'm no expert.
 * Image:Cisneros3.jpg needs a caption.

Hope that helps. &laquo; Lord  ViD  &raquo; 20:24, 13 December 2005 (UTC)


 * Hi thank you. I've addressed #1 and #2 .. #3 your right, the article originated as a EB1911 and had had heavy copedits allready to bring up to modern standards but another pass through from someone elses perspective would help. #4 there's nothing to caption but the obvious "Portrait of Cisneros" and I thought it looked better left unsaid with no thumb-box, but if this is a requirement will add it. thanks again. --Stbalbach 02:13, 14 December 2005 (UTC)