Wikipedia:Peer review/Frank Fetter/archive1

Frank Fetter
After a failed GA nom., I have worked to improve the article based on the GA reviewer's comments. He suggested that I seek a peer review after following his advice on revisions, so here I am. Please note the GA review here for an idea of what areas the previous reviewer cited as needing some work. I would like to get this article to GA status (and perhaps eventually FA status), so please keep the GA criteria in mind. Thanks, DickClarkMises 20:58, 21 March 2007 (UTC)

Majoreditor
It's off to a good start but still needs more work. Some suggestions:


 * The sections on Professional Life and Theoretical Contributions aren't developed enough. In particular I suggest enriching the first two parts of the Theoretical Contributions section.
 * An additional image may be helpful

Good luck.


 * Thanks for your input. I found a book cover image to add to the article and am asking permission to release another image of Fetter himself from a school website under the GFDL. As for the Professional Life and Theoretical Contributions section, I'll probably try to elaborate on those tomorrow. Any other suggestions? DickClarkMises 02:00, 22 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Okay, I also added images of Alfred Marshall and Irving Fisher in the subsections that talks about Fetter's criticism of each of them. I have also expanded the Theoretical Contributions section a bit. DickClarkMises 04:04, 22 March 2007 (UTC)