Wikipedia:Peer review/Fritz the Cat/archive1

Fritz the Cat
I think that this article needs a great deal of improvement in some areas, but I don't know what to do. Any suggestions? (Ibaranoff24 19:48, 24 April 2006 (UTC))


 * The Character section needs to be expanded. I'd also change Publication history into just History and merge the sections about the films and his death into that, dropping the films' plots (there are seperate articles for those). A list of comic stories would also be nice. Maybe you could also add some more about the reception, how did the comics sell, what makes them so important in comics' history, how are they seen today? And were there any incidents where the publishers actually got into trouble (it mentions Kurtzman was afraid to publish it)? The article also needs to better quote its sources, and some POV things like "the tomcat we all know and love" need to go. --Fritz Saalfeld (Talk) 20:07, 25 April 2006 (UTC)


 * I cleaned the article up a bit. I don't really like the list of stories as it stands, and I'm not quite sure what you feel a list of stories would accomplish. The stories are all from the book The Life & Death of Fritz the Cat (printed in 1993), and the publication and creation dates are from the same source. (Ibaranoff24 22:31, 26 April 2006 (UTC))
 * Such a list gives the reader an overview over how many stories with the character where published, and over what time. As such they are quite noteworthy. Having such a section in articles about comic characters is also recomended by the WikiProject Comics. --Fritz Saalfeld (Talk) 22:39, 26 April 2006 (UTC)