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Fuck the Millennium
We (WikiProject The KLF) have recently improved The KLF to Featured Article status, and we are turning our attention now to our articles on the band's recordings. Our aim is to create readable, enjoyable, comprehensive and factually accurate articles, using inline citations and relevant quotations wherever possible. To "test the waters" I am asking for peers to review Fuck the Millennium, about The KLF's 1997 comeback campaign. Please bring up anything which could prevent this article being promoted to an FA or which would cause you to object to such a nomination. Thank you in advance. --kingboyk 12:27, 9 June 2006 (UTC)


 * A minor point, but what the heck does "acid house oriented" mean? Gamaliel 13:11, 9 June 2006 (UTC)
 * Hmm... sounds clumsy, doesn't it. We'll try to think of a better way of expressing that the song was acid-house based but a bit of a mixture of styles. --kingboyk 14:04, 9 June 2006 (UTC)
 * I've reworded "acid house" as "electronic" and added part of a sentence to make it (hopefully) clearer. Is this better? --Vinoir 17:08, 9 June 2006 (UTC)


 * A detailed review has been posted at Talk:Fuck the Millennium by User:Blue Tie. I'll reply there. --kingboyk 13:40, 12 June 2006 (UTC)