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Fuku Suzuki
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I've noticed that an article on a similar topic, Mana Ashida, achieved good article status and I would eventually like to develop this article to a similar standard. Consequently, I would appreciate it if I could be informed on aspects of this article which need to be improved to bring this article a step closer. In particular feedback on: the general style, other aspects which need to be included/developed and the correction of any errors in the Wiki markup would be greatly appreciated!

Thank you in advance, JTST4RS (talk) 13:33, 31 August 2013 (UTC)