Wikipedia:Peer review/GagaOOLala/archive2

GagaOOLala
I've listed this articsdfcle for peer review because I work in the company here described but I'd like the article to be as unbiased as possible. Thanks, Jaime Costas Nicolás (talk) 07:15, 28 August 2019 (UTC)
 * Previous peer review
 * Comments form Captain Medusa
 * link Taipei in lead
 * It is owned by Portico Media Co., Ltd. -> why is there comma
 * "Lala’ -> add '
 * Name section needs more detail rather than a quote.
 * It is owned by Portico Media Co., Ltd. -> rm from the lead or put it on better place such as starting a sentence.
 * it has Screenshot tab but there isn't a screenshot
 * add the ref after full stop i.e. [2]. to .[2]
 * name sec could be merged into the History section
 * who is Jay Lin.
 * Its first expansion into the Asian market took place with the launch in the 10 countries that conform -> which??
 * GOL STUDIOS in capital
 * Availability section not sourced at all.
 * One year later, on May 13th, 2018, GagaOOLala was launched in Hong Kong and Macau -> On May 13th, 2018, GagaOOLala was launched in Hong Kong and Macau
 * In 2019, the streaming service -> provide the whole date
 * The company made the announcement together with a distribution tie-in with KASHISH Mumbai International Queer Film Festival -> better sentencing
 * exhibition Out in Taiwan. -> remove the ext link
 * It is the home for the filmography of international queer directors such as Simon Chung, Zero Chou, Scud, Marco Berger or Joselito Altarejos, and the distributor in Asia of international hit titles like Blue is the Warmest Color, Moonlight, Front Cover or Weekend. -> source
 * archive sources
 * too many pictures, at least remove GOL STUDIOS logo
 * GOL STUDIOS -> in capital at paragraphs
 * for now___CAPTAIN MEDUSA talk   12:54, 3 September 2019 (UTC)