Wikipedia:Peer review/Garibaldi Provincial Park/archive1

Garibaldi Provincial Park
I am working on an overhaul of the provincial parks of BC as part of Wikiproject Canada. Garibaldi Provincial Park is the first of these - I've done a fair bit of work on it. I'd like to use this peer review to ensure that page is up to standard, and, as I am new to wikipedia, I would take this opportunity to improve my writing from the community's feedback and suggestions. Ultimately I'll apply what I learn here to the subsequent pages in this project.

Thanks, Luidias (talk) 20:19, 12 June 2019 (UTC)