Wikipedia:Peer review/Gary Donnelly (Irish republican)/archive1

Gary Donnelly (Irish republican)
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because that's what you do

Thanks, TheWarOfArt (talk) 19:54, 19 August 2014 (UTC)

I'll take the privilege of reviewing this article.

Here's what I found so far:
 * Lead could use some expansion.
 * An infobox containing info and a picture of the person in question could help (if not, then picture will do).
 * Is there a birthdate for the person?
 * Any mention of his previous life before his time in prison and with politics?
 * Add the date you put the references in the article.
 * Who wrote the articles you have links for?

What I've found so far is good and is somewhere close to start-class quality if the changes are made. Keep up the work. DepressedPer (talk) 07:32, 28 August 2014 (UTC)