Wikipedia:Peer review/Geography of the Yukon/archive1

Geography of the Yukon
I wrote this article a couple of months ago. Upon re-reading it, I believe it is a pretty good piece of work that could also serve as a template for other Canadian provincial/territorial geography articles which are either missing or incomplete. I just added a bit more stuff including references.Any comments and suggestions would be welcome. I have one which I am unable to fulfill: I believe the list of mountain ranges would benefit from a map, but I don't have the appropriate software to make one; assistance would be appreciated here. Luigizanasi 18:00, 30 October 2005 (UTC)

--maclean25 19:20, 30 October 2005 (UTC)
 * The first sentence, "The Yukon Territory is in the northwestern corner of Canada." doesn't capture the essence of the article. Outside this article (this is a complaint about Wikipedia, not this article), more work needs to be done on developing the features of geography. The FA list shows that most of the work has been done on places and the Geography/Geology of foo and not on the geographic features/divisions like Boreal Cordillera Ecozone. Anyways back the PR, check the wikilinks; "Yukon" and "Whitehorse" only need be wikilinked once, or few times if you want. Definately needs some maps or illustrations of the section topic. See the FA Geography of India as an example.