Wikipedia:Peer review/Gheorghe Mureșan/archive1

Gheorghe Muresan
I've listed this article for peer review because… I think it gives insight to the (arguably) tallest player in NBA history. Few know that a Romania has this honor, and I think that it would educate more.

Thanks, Basketball110 03:22, 7 November 2007 (UTC)


 * It needs expanding. Also, it should have some references indicating where the information is from. DrKiernan 11:12, 13 November 2007 (UTC)

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