Wikipedia:Peer review/Girija Kumar Mathur/archive1

Girija Kumar Mathur
I've listed this article for peer review because… I wish to improve this article to a great extent. It's quite rusty and maculate now... Thanks, Bismuth 123 (talk) 12:30, 2 January 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for your edits to this article,. What an interesting article about someone who has played a role in the modern social and cultural development of India. Here are some suggestions to improve the article: I hope this advice is useful. I find this article quite interesting and hope that it can one day make it to good article status. If it does, please let me know so I can offer you my congratulations! Cheers --Tom (LT) (talk) 23:46, 30 January 2016 (UTC)
 * Comments from Tom (LT)
 * Firstly, it's already easily to read and has some sources, which is great
 * I value that the article has an infobox that has relevant information in it, making it easy to get a snapshot of this person
 * I suggest including more WP:WIKILINKs so that interested editors can keep browsing Wikipedia if they so desire
 * I suggest including more sources, particularly to support claims about his importance to Hindi literature
 * I suggest including more information about the life of Girija.
 * I suggest expanding the section about reception and criticism (from inside and outside of India) about Girija's works