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Glandular odontogenic cyst


I've listed this article for peer review because much more information was added. The lead section was further expanded, and subsections were added to the article.

Thanks, Shayz2 (talk) 12:56, 15 November 2020 (UTC)

Comments from Cas Liber
Taking a look now....
 * A glandular odontogenic cyst is a rare and benign odontogenic cyst developed at the odontogenic epithelium of the mandible or maxilla. - weird grammar, you mean something like "A glandular odontogenic cyst is a rare and benign odontogenic cyst arising from the odontogenic epithelium of the mandible or maxilla."?


 * Originally, the cyst was labeled as 'sialo-odontogenic cyst' in 1987 - "was described as"?


 * Following the initial classification, only 60 medically documented cases were present in the population by 2003. --> "Following the initial classification, only 60 medically documented cases had been described in the population by 2003." - also what is "in the population" here refer to?


 * The cyst is established as its own biological growth after differentiation from other jaw cysts such as the ‘central mucoepidermoid carcinoma’, a popular type of neoplasm at the salivary glands - needs rewording. I ca't follow this

The wording of the lead is odd - I need to read some of the literature before embarking on any copyediting. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 03:55, 18 November 2020 (UTC)