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Global F.C.
This peer review discussion has been closed. The article has a potential for a good article promotion. It was nominated for deletion once and copyedited by a member of GOCE. I am looking forward for some suggestions on how to further improve this article.

Thanks and all the best, FairyTailRocks (talk) 11:11, 9 March 2014 (UTC)

Comments from Cas Liber

 *  ...is a professional Filipino association football club, established in March 2000. - the team was established in March 2000 or the league was established then?
 * Cleared and fixed some few tweaks.


 * To this first sentence I would add "..club based in (wherever they are based)"
 * Added


 * .. .when a group of football enthusiasts from Tacloban formed a weekly football practice. - I have no idea what this is supposed to mean.
 * I added at the end of the sentence "...as their leisure activity." All of this are copied from the club's official website . FairyTailRocks (talk) 12:44, 11 March 2014 (UTC)
 * O-kay I think I get it - they played socially once a week (?)
 * I will try to add more additional information as I can. But right now, I will stay with the original sentence. Thanks! FairyTailRocks (talk) 05:20, 13 March 2014 (UTC)