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God of War III
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because…this is a huge article, and since it is a B-class, I'm surprised nobody has requested a peer review; I think that just by cutting some stuff in the article down/out, it could become an everyday good article, and there are plenty of sources, and a little more work on the lead

Thanks, SCB &#39;92 (talk) 20:23, 29 June 2011 (UTC)

Comments by User:Tintor2 Some things I have noted are: ✅ ✅ ✅ ✅ ✅
 * The lead is very short, using small paragraphs. See WP:Lead.
 * Most of the gameplay section is unsourced.
 * The plot could be trimmed down considering that as far as I see in the section it "Kratos fight this" various times.
 * The reception section also needs organizing. It only says "IGN says (quote), GameSpot says (quote), etc." Paraprashing is required.
 * Some references need to have worked into to include parameters like publisher, author, date, etc. instead of bare urls.
 * There are a lot of one-sentece paragraphs and such things are not approved by the manual of style.

I recommend using GAs or FAs as an example to follow like Resident Evil 2, Terra Nova: Strike Force Centauri. Regards.Tintor2 (talk) 15:54, 4 July 2011 (UTC)