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Gods Eater Burst
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because… I would like comments and feedback to improve this article.

Thanks, Ivan530 Talk 13:59, 3 July 2012 (UTC)

Comments from Teancum --Teancum (talk) 12:41, 13 July 2012 (UTC)
 * In the lead, God Eater 2 should be in italics
 * The "Development" and "Related Media" sections are small--they can be merged into one section called "Development and marketing". Additionally the sections "Trading card game", "Miniatures" and "Soundtrack" can all be merged into one paragraph with the soundtrack listing following. This is per WP:LAYOUT
 * The Reception section should be expanded. Template:Video game reviews can be added as an infobox, aggregate score information from sites like GameRankings and Metacritic can be added, and additional reviews can be listed/added to the prose. See WP:VG/S for a list of reliable sources that can be used.
 * There is one disambig link
 * Changed to Cohesion (chemistry)
 * Other than general expansion take a quick look at the automated tips for other info
 * Other than general expansion take a quick look at the automated tips for other info