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Gojira (band)

 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for May 2008.
 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for May 2008.

This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I want to make it a Featured Article. It is already a GA and I would like to know if it passes the Featured article criteria. And if not, I would like to know how to improve it. Thanks. Cheers.  LYKANTROP   13:33, 4 May 2008 (UTC)


 * Laser brain's comments
 * You have a great start here, but I wouldn't consider this anywhere near comprehensive enough for FA status. Take a look at some other FAs on musical groups, like Powderfinger or Red Hot Chili Peppers to get an idea of the depth required.  More research and more writing is needed.
 * The lead is far too short, but I suspect it will grow as the article grows.
 * The prose is pretty good as it stands; just need to expand it. :) -- Laser brain  (talk)  16:40, 6 May 2008 (UTC)