Wikipedia:Peer review/Goran Jelisić/archive1

Goran Jelisić
I doubled the length of this article by finding new sources, looking at existing sources and expanding the material, and doing some restructuring and copy-editing. I would love to get any pointers about how to improve the overall quality of this page. In addition, I suspect I threw of the weight of the page by adding too much biographical material and by adding too much about the weird complexities of some of the sympathetic witnesses at his trial. Getting an outside look at weight would be great. Finally, I will add information from any relevant sources that are thrown at me; I tried my best to find material, but others may be able to suggest more.

Thanks for your time! Jlevi (talk) 15:13, 28 February 2020 (UTC)