Wikipedia:Peer review/Graveship/archive1

Peer Review
I added some sources and inline citations - for the most part, the term is almost exclusively defined the context of the Manor of Wakefield but with an OED entry I think it is notable enough. I was hoping someone could just give a quick scan and remove the maintenance templates. Thanks! Kirk (talk) 18:23, 17 December 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your edits to this article, I can see what drew you to this interesting topic! I have reviewed this article and would like to say I don't think the maintenance templates are it's main concern. In fact I would more like to say that I find this article a little hard to read. I think that what a "grave" is should be clearly stated in the title and that the article should use its own words instead of using the OED statement in the lead (currently occupies half its volume). I guess my encouragement would be to be more confident in your editing style and maybe experiment a bit with a structure that you feel conveys the information best. Cheers --Tom (LT) (talk) 00:33, 13 January 2021 (UTC)