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Gray Fox (Metal Gear)
Recently re-written (mostly by yours truly) a la the Solid Snake article, gonna take care of the merge tag myself. Don't really know what else to say, appreciate some advice

(The Bread 00:19, 6 August 2006 (UTC))
 * The photo comparison seems more forced than in Solid Snake, but I'm not terribly familiar with it. What's there is fine, but there ought to be more information out there; any revealing interviews with Kojima? Choice quotes from reviewers that exemplify the reception of the character? Nifboy 05:03, 6 August 2006 (UTC)

This is a supporting character only; I've proposed reducing the plot summary drastically (as well as removing the unreferenced, long-shot image comparison) and merging it with a list of supporting characters (per WP:FICT) at Talk:List of recurring Metal Gear characters. - A Man In Bl♟ck (conspire | past ops) 06:19, 6 August 2006 (UTC)


 * I agree, essentially; if there isn't more information available to round out the article, it ought to be merged into the prose-list. Nifboy 07:17, 6 August 2006 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ t 01:25, 9 August 2006 (UTC)