Wikipedia:Peer review/Gray Wolf/archive1

Wolf
I've been organizing and working on this article a bit, hoping to submit it to FAC soon. I think the section on howling would do nicely with an image, and the references could be expanded. Any suggestions? Sango 123  23:33, August 19, 2005 (UTC)


 * Would love to see this as FA. I'd like to see more on wolves in myth / fable - there's a link to werewolves but maybe a bit of text on that in the main article would help.  If the images are ok (re: copyright tags) then its ready for submission now imho, save the addition of the werewolf stuff. --PopUpPirate 23:48, August 19, 2005 (UTC)
 * Comment - Great myth / fable additions! I'd support as FAC if you put it there! --PopUpPirate 21:21, August 23, 2005 (UTC)
 * How's this ? Sango  123  14:08, August 22, 2005 (UTC)


 * Why is there a section on life span and another section of mortality? The TOC is very long, you may want to look at taking out some of the ===h3=== headings--nixie 02:19, 20 August 2005 (UTC)
 * Thanks - I've moved all age-related information under mortality and somewhat shortened the TOC . Sango  123  14:19, August 20, 2005 (UTC)
 * For me, it's a very good read. Excellent work. &mdash; Stevey7788 (talk) 01:04, 22 August 2005 (UTC)
 * made a few copyedits to the article. It reads good. -- ZeWrestler  Talk 16:49, 22 August 2005 (UTC)
 * Thank you. Just one thing: could 'grayish' be changed back to 'greyish' for consistency? Sango  123  17:07, August 22, 2005 (UTC)
 * Good point. change it then. -- ZeWrestler  Talk 17:46, 22 August 2005 (UTC)
 * Done. Sango  123  17:53, August 22, 2005 (UTC)