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Great Lakes Storm of 1913
I started this article from scratch a week ago, and would like some input on its progress. This is my first attempt at putting together an entire article, and I'm not very sure of my encyclopedic-writing abilities. It was featured on the main page in the Did you know section a couple days ago. -- brian0918 &#153;  02:50, 9 Feb 2005 (UTC)


 * Very nice! Not much left to improve on. However, a longer lead section would be good to have. Can't think of anything else right now. --mav 07:59, 10 Feb 2005 (UTC)


 * I've made it a little longer, but am not sure what else could be put in the lead section. -- brian0918 &#153;  18:19, 10 Feb 2005 (UTC)