Wikipedia:Peer review/Guitar Hero II/archive1

Guitar Hero II

 * I'd appreciate an all-around review on this one. I think that the article has improved greatly since the last assessment, which placed it at B-Class. I think it has a good number of references and is well written. Some areas:
 * Reception - Critical reception is, I believe, important for games, and it would be good to see how well the article is doing there.
 * Technical Issues - There has been some conflict in that area, and it would be great to see how well the working out has been done.
 * Thanks for any and all feedback! -- tennis man    sign here!  02:41, 18 May 2007 (UTC)


 * I don't mean this to be rude, but the article is hard to read in its current state. Here are some notes:
 * The structure of the article needs to be re-thought. Sections like "Venues" and "Characters" are part of the gameplay and should not be separate sections. Sections have been integrated into text. -- tennis man  02:38, 21 June 2007 (UTC)
 * The History section starts with the release of GHII. I would expect a history section to start with development and end with release.
 * Game guide material needs to be removed; go through the entire article and ask "Is this of interest to some one who will never play the game?" — if the answer is no, then remove it. Removed game guide material. -- tennis man  02:48, 21 June 2007 (UTC)
 * I see large sections of bulleted lists that should be converted to prose. Removed, except for track lists. -- tennis man  02:38, 21 June 2007 (UTC)
 * The "Musical references" section just looks like trivia under another name. Anything that can't be incorporate elsewhere should be removed. Section has been removed. -- tennis man  02:38, 21 June 2007 (UTC)
 * The lead is is insufficient. Added a paragraph of information akin to the introductory material in games such as Shadow of the Colossus. -- tennis man    sign here!  16:59, 25 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Reply here once the above have been addressed and I'll take another look.  Pagra shtak  15:48, 22 May 2007 (UTC)