Wikipedia:Peer review/Guitar Hero III: Legends of Rock/archive1

Guitar Hero III: Legends of Rock
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like to nominate it for WP:FAC someday.

Thanks, Gary King (talk) 21:42, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
 * You need to add piping to the publisher parameters in the cites. Tenacious D Fan (talk) 17:10, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Could you clarify what you mean? Are you talking about fixing disambiguation links in publisher fields? Gary King (talk) 21:46, 3 April 2008 (UTC)


 * Comments
 * First paragraph of the Soundtrack section needs a reference.
 * make sure any version-exclusive information that is notable is included and referenced.
 * I guess the images are in the optimal spot, but it would be desirable to space them a bit if at all possible.
 * Also, make sure all the fair use rationales are very specific as to what is demonstrated and why it is necessary to be demonstrated.
 * Gameplay section almost totally unreferenced, get the game manual and quote it, see Final Fantasy IV
 * above is addressed Gary King (talk) 21:05, 4 April 2008 (UTC)


 * Give it a copyedit, and you should be all set! Good luck! Judgesurreal777 (talk) 15:39, 4 April 2008 (UTC)