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HMS Boreas (H77)


I've listed this article for peer review because I've been working on it for a bit recently and would like to try to get it to A-Class.

Thanks in advance, User:Thatone weird wikier  &#124;  Conversations  and  Contributions  19:45, 27 June 2020 (UTC)

Comments from AustralianRupert: G'day, thanks for your efforts with this article. I have a couple of minor observations/suggestions: AustralianRupert (talk) 09:33, 12 July 2020 (UTC)
 * the completed date in the infobox is inconsistent with the body
 * This is a somewhat interesting case, as there seem to be plenty of sources arguing both ways. I'll ask at WP:RD. User:Thatone weird wikier  &#124;  Conversations  and  Contributions  12:11, 12 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Done following suggestions. User:Thatone weird wikier  &#124;  Conversations  and  Contributions  19:36, 12 July 2020 (UTC)
 * the following terms are overlinked: escort destroyer and bridge
 * Done. User:Thatone weird wikier  &#124;  Conversations  and  Contributions  12:20, 12 July 2020 (UTC)
 * inconsistent: "loaned to the Royal Hellenic Navy on 10 February" (body) v. "Fate: Loaned to the Royal Hellenic Navy, 11 February 1944" and "Acquired: 11 February 1944" (infobox)
 * Fixed to 10 February and changed citation. User:Thatone weird wikier  &#124;  Conversations  and  Contributions  12:24, 12 July 2020 (UTC)
 * inconsistent: "returned to the Royal Navy at Malta on 9 October 1951" (body) v. "Fate: Returned to the Royal Navy, 10 May 1951" (infobox)
 * Changed to 9 October 1951. User:Thatone weird wikier  &#124;  Conversations  and  Contributions  12:26, 12 July 2020 (UTC)
 * suggest splitting the first paragraph of the construction section as it is quite long
 * Done. User:Thatone weird wikier  &#124;  Conversations  and  Contributions  12:27, 12 July 2020 (UTC)
 * inconsistent: "scrapped in 1951" (lead) v. "arrived at Rosyth under tow on 15 April 1952 to be broken up" (body)
 * Changed to 15 April 1952 and switched citation. User:Thatone weird wikier  &#124;  Conversations  and  Contributions  12:34, 12 July 2020 (UTC)

, I have responded to all of your comments. User:Thatone weird wikier &#124;  Conversations  and  Contributions  19:36, 12 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Nice work, thanks. Regards, AustralianRupert (talk) 08:47, 13 July 2020 (UTC)