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Halo: Chronicles

 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for August 2008.
 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for August 2008.

This peer review discussion has been closed. This article is being reviewed as part of a big Halo (series) media topic being created, and so this article needs to be peer reviewed. Not much has been revealed yet, so take a crack at what's here, make sure it's in good shape; prose, fair use rationales, other. Thanks much! Judgesurreal777 (talk) 03:21, 7 August 2008 (UTC)

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 * Seems a bit premature to be listing this for peer review as there is little context and the game is unreleased. A few things I noticed:
 * "It was revealed that it would in fact be part of a new series (or mini-series) of games, not a single release." - When was this revealed, and by who?
 * "They also speculated that the game could retail for half the cost of a normal Xbox 360 title." - Assume the reader knows nothing about games. How much exactly?
 * "dramatically expanding" - Really? Doesn't sound very encyclopedic.

Until there's more context and information available, don't expect much. — Wackymacs ( talk  ~  edits ) 20:01, 10 August 2008 (UTC)
 * It's required by featured topic criteria that it be reviewed, so that's why its here so early. Judgesurreal777 (talk) 22:57, 10 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Thanks for those fixes, I did them :) Judgesurreal777 (talk) 00:11, 11 August 2008 (UTC)