Wikipedia:Peer review/Harisu/archive1

Harisu
I'm looking for some general feedback on this article following my recent efforts to get it up to GA standards. I don't think there's a great deal I can add to it in terms of content, but I'd like to get any potential issues resolved before I list it at WP:GAC. Thanks in advance! PC78 22:26, 9 June 2007 (UTC)


 * Comment It surpasses GA standard and should be submitted to GAC right now. LuciferMorgan 22:44, 9 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Thanks! If I may be so bold, what would it need to get it up to FA class? PC78 22:48, 9 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Submitting it and addressing other editors concerns? If you have the time to address any concerns FAC reviewers may give, then it'll pass FAC likely. Depends on whether you have the time to address any concerns (should they be forthcoming). LuciferMorgan 00:40, 10 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Well, yes. But I meant if the article was lacking in any way that might prevent it getting FA status? Still, I'm not too worried about that now. I'd rather get it through GA review first. PC78 01:22, 10 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Not that I can pick out. LuciferMorgan 01:24, 10 June 2007 (UTC)


 * Comment "By the end of 2001, Harisu had published her autobiography, Eve from Adam" - Did it enter any book charts in the continent she is from? Are there any critical reviews available you can use as feedback it has received? LuciferMorgan 00:40, 10 June 2007 (UTC)
 * No idea, and no. All I have for that are a couple of vague comments, one that says it wasn't a bestseller, and one that says it was. Not much I can do with that! PC78 01:22, 10 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Any feedback on her albums then that can be added? LuciferMorgan 01:24, 10 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Not really, only the chart positions and sales figures mentioned in the discography section. Might be as well to work those into the main text, I suppose. PC78 01:29, 10 June 2007 (UTC)
 * It would be a good idea to do so. The only thing holding the article back at present is the amount of available info. LuciferMorgan 01:46, 10 June 2007 (UTC)
 * OK, I've tweaked the text a bit so that it now mentions the chart positions (or lack of) for each of her albums, but not the sales figures, since they're pretty meaningless without any frame of reference. I've also added a short paragraph to the discography section which mentions her musical influences, mainly because I couldn't find anywhere else to put it. PC78 19:05, 11 June 2007 (UTC)