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Harry and the Potters discography


This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because… it has failed to achieve featured list status twice, it also went through two peer review before with nothing but semi-automated comments. I would like to know how I can improve the article, so that it meets the featured list criteria. Length has been addressed and now am wondering how it can become "a timeline of important events on a notable topic" - I believe it requires third-party sources, though I am not certain. I am looking for any suggestions about improving the article, generally meeting the criteria or if you would be so kind, directly editing the article. Thanks! Hpfan9374 (talk) 10:34, 29 February 2008 (UTC)


 * Here's what I came across; all the dates are not uniform, some have "Month Year" others "Month Day, Year" and still yet "mm/dd/yyyy". Those all need to be the same.  Under live albums, for how short the section is demonstrtive pronouns are used too much, that section also needs to all be in the same tense except for the part about the availability of download.  The other sections are extremely...useless.  I suggest either replacing that section with album covers, or greatly expanding those sections.  Finally, the not released section is outdated.  The link which goes with "The Wrath of Hermione" brings me straight to the song.  Hope that was helpful.  §tepshep   •   ¡Talk to me!  16:57, 5 March 2008 (UTC)


 * I cannot change the format of the dates, as Harry and the Potters are an independent band and release dates are not kept or recorded, it is however suitable for Internet Archive albums where the recording date is. The live albums section, now changed to the Internet Archive albums section has been edited and uses the sentence structure of that in Tenacious D discography. The other sections are not useless and album covers cannot be placed in discographies as it is against copyright issues, also they cannot be expanded anymore. I have changed the reference on the Unreleased songs section as it did link straight to the song. Thanks. Hpfan9374 (talk) 08:27, 6 May 2008 (UTC)