Wikipedia:Peer review/Hassan Evan Naseem/archive1

Hassan Evan Naseem
Hello, I would you guys to do peer reviewing of this article, mainly for grammitc errors. Other suggestions for improvement will very much be appricated. --Oblivious 06:36, 5 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * I've made a few grammatical changes, feel free to revert if you think I've changed the meaning of anything.-gadfium 09:38, 5 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * It's better now. Thanks --Oblivious 09:45, 5 Jun 2005 (UTC)