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Heavy Metal Umlaut
I've worked on it quite a bit recently. I've shortened the lists, added pictures, etc. I really need more suggestions though. I'm trying to get this article up to GA status.  Connör  ( talk ) 18:28, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
 * I haven't read the whole article, but I am impressed by the lead section and the background on real umlauts. Consider breaking the main section on gratuitous heavy metal umlauts into subsections.  This article may indeed be ready for Good Article status.  I think it's also on the list of unusual articles. Shalom Hello 19:04, 5 September 2007 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 00:36, 15 September 2007 (UTC)