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Heavy Traffic
A fairly short article I've worked on. A previous revision of the article was peer reviewed here. I think I did a pretty good job with the current revision. Any thoughts? (Ibaranoff24 18:43, 27 September 2006 (UTC))
 * I'm not sure that forums are great reference points. Seegoon 14:09, 1 October 2006 (UTC)
 * It's the director himself speaking on his own website. You can't get a better reference than that. (Ibaranoff24 22:59, 2 October 2006 (UTC))
 * Yes, indeed you can, second party sources are often better. Punkmorten 12:03, 26 October 2006 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, Ruhrfisch 01:38, 16 October 2006 (UTC)