Wikipedia:Peer review/Hello Garci scandal/archive1

Hello Garci scandal

 * ''Moved from Peer review/2005 Philippine electoral crisis

Hey there, I'm a newb, so I am not really familiar with the procedures. More importantly, I nominated this because I would really like to improve this article, hopefully to feature article candidate status. Any constructive criticism, copyediting, etc, will be very much appreciated. Pls bear with me if I post a late response--Noypi380 11:33, 10 November 2005 (UTC)


 * You might want to use footnotes instead of inline links to external websites. --seav 13:36, 13 November 2005 (UTC)
 * Well, since the crisis was recent, most of the sources are web published, rather than traditional books, and hence embedded html links type were used instead, to be consistent with Wiki's Inline Citations Guide. Also, since the crisis is very controversial, sources are easily reachable after reading a particular sentence. Uhm, I hope that answers the problem. But if you insist, I'll try to incorporate footnotes, and I'll definitely have to fix the reference section too. :) --Noypi380 13:03, 14 November 2005 (UTC)


 * More pictures. In fact, the two pictures that are currently on the article are unsourced and should be deleted. Coffee 08:20, 14 November 2005 (UTC)
 * Yes, pics are a prob. Unfortunately, I have no access to pics, so the people who uploaded them are the best to fix em. I also do not know who actually uploaded the pics. uh-oh. I'll see what can me done. :) --Noypi380 13:03, 14 November 2005 (UTC)