Wikipedia:Peer review/Helmer Swenholdt/archive1

Helmer Swenholt
I would like feedback on how to improve this page. For example, I added the military person infobox and a photograph, and made some sections to the bio. How can I get this article up to some higher level? I think the most important contributions he made were in World War 2, but bridge building is not such an exciting topic so I'd like review on how to interest readers. He asked his troops "to Build, To Conquer". I want to build this page. Mfields1 00:12, 5 June 2006 (UTC)