Wikipedia:Peer review/Helmer Swenholt/archive1

Helmer Swenholt
I would like constructive comments to improve the article. My long term goal will be for it to be a FA. Note: I recently discovered I had mispelled the article title, the name was supposed to be "Swenholt" not "Swenholdt". Feedback pays. Mfields1 23:30, 7 June 2006 (UTC)


 * Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.


 * Per WP:CONTEXT and WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link January 15, 2006, but do not link January 2006.


 * After a year, for consistency, a comma should either be used throughout the entire article or not used at all (for example, either In 1908, this happened or In 1908 this happened).


 * This article may be a bit list-weighty; in other words, some of the lists should be converted to prose (paragraph form).


 * Per WP:MOS, the first letters of words in heading should not be capitalized unless: 1) it is a proper noun or 2) it is the first word of the heading.
 * You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas.
 * Thanks, Andy t 23:55, 7 June 2006 (UTC)


 * In response to Andy's point about dates in articles: this task is easier with the aid of a 'dates' tab in edit mode. Simply copy the entire contents of User:Bobblewik/monobook.js to your own monobook. Then follow the instructions in your monobook to clear the cache (i.e. press Ctrl-Shift-R in Firefox, or Ctrl-F5 in IE) before it will work. You will also get a 'units' tab. Hope that helps. bobblewik 17:45, 8 June 2006 (UTC)