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Henrietta Lacks
Please help improve the article and leave critical comments. --Richard Arthur Norton (1958- ) 17:34, 23 January 2007 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 02:27, 24 January 2007 (UTC)


 * It's a good article, but rather short, and needs citations on the "HeLa" and "Legacy" sections. Also, try to put actual citations in the footnotes and incorporate the present footnotes into the text.  bibliomaniac 1  5  00:44, 25 January 2007 (UTC)


 * All completed! The article can't grow much more until the new book is published this year. --Richard Arthur Norton (1958- ) 03:01, 25 January 2007 (UTC)