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Heuschrecke 10

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I've listed this article for peer review because it has passed GA class and has had a lot of content added to it, see this diff. I want some feed back as to what it still currently needs, or what is "wrong" with it. Thanks,  Dreamy   §   23:12, 20 January 2008 (UTC)


 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style. If you would find such a review helpful, please click here. Thanks, APR t 04:33, 24 January 2008 (UTC)


 * I have fixed what can be fixed from that, anything else?  Dreamy   §   15:55, 25 January 2008 (UTC)