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Hinukh people
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I just made some translations from ruwiki. I need a general review regarding the grammar and other issues.

Thanks, Ali-al-Bakuvi (talk) 12:23, 21 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Since they only live in two villages in Dagestan, it would make sense to give the names of these two villages.--Pharos (talk) 15:52, 7 May 2014 (UTC)
 * Done. Ali-al-Bakuvi (talk) 16:00, 7 May 2014 (UTC)
 * I notice there is an article in The Red Book of the Peoples of the Russian Empire that focuses on the history of one of the villages, indeed the one that shares its name with the ethnic group as a whole. Perhaps this source could be used somewhat.  Also, does this mean that one is the "original" village, and the other is a later settlement?--Pharos (talk) 16:29, 7 May 2014 (UTC)
 * The first one is the parent village, and its name in fact is the name of the group (with mispronunciation in Russian). Second settlement was founded in the end of the 18th century and its population consists of Avars, Hinukhs (which are still considered to be a subgroup of Avars) and Dargins. But unfortunately I could not find any written source about when they resettled there. Ali-al-Bakuvi (talk) 17:14, 7 May 2014 (UTC)