Wikipedia:Peer review/His Last Vow/archive1

His Last Vow
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because after the GA review, and a bit of feedback from J and the Dr ( and ), both seemed positive. J advised taking it to peer review to see what needed doing before hopefully the next step is taken.

Thanks, Mat  ty. 007 09:10, 25 July 2014 (UTC)


 * I think the article is absolutely stellar, and couldn't find any real errors. I thought in the lead, it could read "The episode received a positive reception from critics, and Mikkelsen's performance as Magnussen, in particular, was praised." Also, the line spacing after the Moftiss interview in "Critical Recpetion" section is a little wonky, almost like there are two spaces there.  Beyond that, it's a very strong article.--Esprit15d • talk • contribs 14:58, 8 August 2014 (UTC)
 * Not nominating for FA now as going off wiki for a few months, but if I return, who knows? I think you meant Gatiss rather than the Moftiss (imagine them blended!), and changed both issues per the suggestions. Thanks for the help, Mat  ty  .  007  19:22, 8 August 2014 (UTC)
 * Nope, I meant Moftiss (which is the online name to refer to them as a team, but I guess that is less known that I realized). Glad to have helped.  Best wishes.--Esprit15d • talk • contribs 23:29, 9 August 2014 (UTC)