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History Revisited
I just wrote this, and am interested in any improvements that could be made. I feel that the article is as comprehensive as is possible for this subject. Punctured Bicycle 12:28, 31 August 2006 (UTC)
 * This is probably as comprehensive and well referenced as could be - my only gripe, looking at it, is that the references section would look better if it were a smaller font. Seegoon 17:14, 4 September 2006 (UTC)
 * Done. Punctured Bicycle 18:04, 4 September 2006 (UTC)
 * A bit UK-centric - that may be the nature of the beast, but some mention of chart placing, reviews, availability etc. in the rest of the world may help. It ends abruptly - did EMI does as they promised? Is it still available? When did the band break up? Apart from that, seems good (There is a double reference in the order [10][5], you could reorder that, but that's really picky) Yomangani talk 15:12, 6 September 2006 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the comments. I've edited it to make the ending less abrupt. As for international chart placings, I don't know of any reliable/comprehensive/consistent sources that contain such data (though such a resource would be quite useful). I also cannot find any non-UK reviews of the album. Punctured Bicycle 15:37, 9 September 2006 (UTC)