Wikipedia:Peer review/History of Baltimore City College/archive2

History of Baltimore City College
previous PR

This article is a former FAC, but failed to meet the criteria at the time largely because of concerns over the prose. Any comments on how to improve the prose would be greatly appreciated. Thanks, Golem88991 01:56, 5 September 2007 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 03:45, 11 September 2007 (UTC)
 * I clicked on the link but I do not see the suggestions. Golem88991 04:23, 11 September 2007 (UTC)