Wikipedia:Peer review/History of Celtic F.C./archive1

History of Celtic F.C.
This peer review discussion has been closed. I know this article has it's flaws, but I'd like an independent view of it and advice on how to improve it.

Thanks, ShugSty (talk) 02:04, 16 February 2014 (UTC)

Comments from Cas Liber
Just saw this - a few thoughts....


 * I'd remove "has a long and illustrious history" - let the facts speak for themselves.


 * Remove choppy paras - there are some in the first section.


 * Remove the see also